After One Bite Leads To Another released in print, I'm busy editing Book 2 in the series One Bite For The Unborn.
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I’m trying to
remember exactly where I heard this. I
know I was teaching a class and a woman was taking it. She wanted to write a
romance novel. That was fine. That is a subject I can teach and I was
willing to help her out.
That was until we got
further into the class it became apparent we weren’t on the same page. Her heroine was a nurse and her hero, an architect.
“That’s
great,” I said. “What are you doing for
the research?”
“Oh,
there’s no research,” she said.
Can’t
remember if I mumbled something or just stared blankly.
“It’s
a romance book,” she pointed out as if I was an idiot. “You don’t need that kind of stuff. All you have to do is get the hero and
heroine into the same room and they will know what to do.”
Wink wink, nudge, nudge,
Yeah,
I don’t remember her name and pretty sure it didn’t appear on the New York
Times best seller list.
There
a multitude of components we need to make our book work.
You
have to have characters. That much is a
given. A plot is good, one that doesn’t
involve merely getting them into a room and letting them figure things would be
even better.
Characters
& a Plot…to sustain those elements, research in a necessity if you want
anyone to read your book.
Because
if you put in that little tidbit about the rocket science being used in the cafeteria
I can guarantee someone who works in rocket science is going to e-mail you and
let you know how far off you are. And if
they are in a good mood, they will use Twitter, too, and Facebook and pretty much
every other social network they can think of. That review on Amazon? Ewww.
We
don’t have to know about rocket science.
But
we do have report what we learn on that subject if it is going to appear in the
pages of our books.
I
have spoken to rock bands, The CIA, The FBI (not nearly as friendly as the
CIA). I have cold called experts in
fields of New York architecture to verify parks settings back east. Last year, I needed a Gaelic word I could not
find anywhere. The hero of DEAD MEN PLAY
THE GAME is Scottish, so there is the starting point. Scotland. I emailed The University of Edinburgh (Googled
the address), got one department who didn’t have the answer but was willing to
pass the question to the department they knew would. The word I needed is in
the book.
And
that right there is the key.
The
majority of people in the world have a job.
They do the same thing pretty much day in and day out. It’s get a little boring. And then they get
this phone call or this email from a writer--always
provide your credentials even if it’s your first book—and it’s a spice added to
their day.
One
of two things is going to happen from the mere asking of your question.
A) They
are swamped, not interested and really don’t want to be bothered or…
B)
They love that you called because
people like to talk about their work or their hobby, they love to share their knowledge. People just want to be asked “Hey what do you
think, know, do you have an opinion on the direction that would make this real
…?”
In my experience, I almost always hit ‘B’. I cold called the manager of a well known rock
band when I heard they were going to be in town. I asked if I could meet with
the band between shows for information on a novel I was working on. Not only did I get the interview with several
members, but the following day when I went back with the family to enjoy the
show, the band took interest in my kids and treated them down right nice. I
still have the photo of all of them together.
“We’ve all been there,” the lead singer
said, ”what do you need from us to make
this happen?”
We
start out with our story and we know the heroine is a nurse and the hero is an
architect, such as my student. Okay,
let’s go from there. What department
does she work in? Predicates? Did you know, like I know after an Internet
search on “A Day in the Life of a Nurse”
that it is not uncommon for a pediatric nurse to have an Elmo sticker stuck on
her stethoscope? Or to have throw-up
wiped up and stained on her uniform on a daily basis? And how about an architect? What does he design? Houses? Commercial housing? Malls?
That information will make a difference in everything from his stress
load to his available time.
Making
up names for businesses is research, too, as it’s in the back of the
story. And making up names is not a bad
practice if you are using local businesses.
Using well known commercial establishments is okay as long as you don’t
stage a crime or murder there. Having
someone choke to death on a Whopper in a Burger King will get you a Cease and
Desist Order from their law firm.
I called the Hershey
Amusement Park in Pennsylvania and spoke to their PR department and they told
me yes, it was fine to use the name of their park in the story--as long as no one
got hurt or killed on one of their roller coasters.
Where
do you get research? Books. Books are good. I just picked up one of religious cults as I
need it for Book III of THE DEAD MEN SERIES.
I also hid it from my mother<g>.
Calling people is really outstanding.
You get to talk to someone who knows the subject and can give you that
little detail you might otherwise miss.
How do you find them? Google, or
the search engine of your choice. And then use the same search engine to find
articles on your required subject.
Remember
to take notes from the people you talk to or print out from the computer. Keep
a three ring notebook and a hole punch handy to store everything in. And I do
mean everything. Books are not short
term projects and as you get to the end, you might be wondering just what is
was Mr. Nice Guy told you when you were a quarter of the way through.
Research
is the hidden backdrop we don’t know we are reading. We never see it as it is seamlessly sprinkled
into the main text, but it is there, giving our characters and our plot the
momentum to move forward.
Dead Men Play The Game
Ashley Barrow is working the worst murder case in Davenport, Oregon's history. She needs a drink to forget the detailed images in mind. When she walks into Ian's pub, Ian knows their lives are about to change, if only for a short while. Vampire and human, their relationships can only last so long. But an enemy from Ian's past has his own agenda about their future.
His sadistic revenge changes Ashley forever, leaving Ian and his long time friends – Travis, Jason, Quinn and Evan -- desperate to ease her into her new life and find a way to defeat their enemy.
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Hello again, Jacqui! I hope all is going well.
ReplyDeleteWell hello there. You having a great day? ^,,^
DeleteWelcome to Happy Ever After Jacqui! I hope you enjoy chatting with all my friends here!
DeleteGreat article. I think doing research is one of the most enjoyable parts of writing. Readers may not always be able to tell if a writer did much in the way of research, but they sure can tell if (s)he HASN'T. Nothing is more irritating to me than blatant errors in a book. It's fine to make up all kinds of stuff in a work of fiction, but it's a colossal mistake to fudge on the facts.
ReplyDeleteEver throw anything uttering "You morons!!" Actually I did that with all of The Tudors I watched, which wasn't much. Nothing about it was real ... I majored in Henry VIII at UCLA ... which is where I learned to research.
DeleteVery helpful advice! I do a lot of research via Google and asking friends/family, but I haven't tried calling or interviewing strangers in professional fields. But I'm open to that, if I need information that they can give me. Great post!
ReplyDeleteResearch is an essential. As Susan says, it becomes all too clear when a writer just hasn't bothered. And if they can't be bothered, why should we...
ReplyDeleteExactly. You can't "research" something like vampires, I mean that is a given because, duh, they don't exist. But you *can* research the myths behind them, find out why is it they can't be seen in mirrors and then determine if that is a direction you want to go. As long as you know the background and where you got it, it's probably a good read.
DeleteKelly has been real good to me with promoting Dead Men Play the Game. I just wanted everyone to know how great she is. ^,,^
ReplyDeleteIt's nice to meet you, Jacqui! I appreciate your insight and advice. There is much more to writing than many people think. :) Kelly, thanks for hosting Jacqui!
ReplyDeleteHey Karen ... nice to meet you, too. Hope I run into you again. ^,,^
ReplyDeleteYou are right that there is more to it than meets the eye and here were are, just sprinkling it though. There is a Thai place in Book II and naming that thing ... took me months. Had to be right, right?
I'll admit to being one of those people who leaves reviews of books that screw up science aspects that are occasionally not so nice. It's NOT hard to talk to people to get details correct! And it makes me nuts when books or TV mess it up. Great post!
ReplyDeleteMan, now you have me nervous! LOL I swear I looked up how to make a Goodnight Kiss!! The fact the local barentern in town didn't have a clue is her fault and not mine!! LOL
Deletethat was bartender. The cat helped!! LOL
DeleteThanks so much for sharing all these tips. I wish I could attend a writing course, and if I ever do I will know to have more respect for the tutor!
ReplyDeleteWriting courses aren't hard to find. I teach mine online and have some coming up -- to help not sell, I hope you know that. It's on my web page, I think. If not, email me. I can tell you some others to find them.
DeleteGreat post!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I like writing about research. I always like finding new facts.
DeleteResearch is vital. Of course, even then it happens that you can overlook something. I admire you for calling people in your quest for research, Jacqui!
ReplyDeletePeople like to be asked. The guys in Scotland, they really did work hard to find the phrase I needed. Only it didn't exist so they went the extra mile, all on their own, to get me one close enough. People are great. Just ask.
DeleteKnow how I got six interviews with Nora? LOL ... I ... asked ... LOL
DeleteResearch is really important. Readers can really pick your work apart if they find incorrect information.
ReplyDeleteWith a Vengeance: I spelt the scotch they were drinking wrong. Turned out editor's husband, it was his fav brand and she caught it. Whew ... how did I miss that?
DeleteI love reading a well researched novel with settings I can relate too.
ReplyDeleteMy towns are made so that gives freedom, but what's is usually real stuff I had to find. Sometimes it's easy, sometimes not. The hard one for me? Naming things like streets or places to eat. Stuff like that. Always a struggle.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad the answer is B I've thought about contacting real people, but then end up doing most of my research online or through books. It's good to know that experts are approachable.
ReplyDeletePeople like to help. They like being asked, makes them feel important that they have something with value. I really have run into few who didn't want to.
ReplyDeleteI'm doing a survey. Who do you like best? Email your answers!! ^,,^
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