Mollie Blake is a published author of contemporary
romance. A lover of reading sexy stories, Mollie decided to go one step further
and write her own. Her romances are filled with danger and peppered with hot
sexy scenes. She is a member of International Thriller Writers and UK Romantic
Novelists Association.
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Beta
Readers
Don’t
you just love that wonderful feeling of finishing your manuscript? The
characters have been living with you for months. You thought you’d never get
that scene right. You changed the build up to the ending, yet again. Then
suddenly it all falls into place and your journey is ended.
Well,
actually, it’s just starting. You love your story. But will anyone else? Is it
really as good as you hoped, as you aimed for? Perhaps no one will love the
hero. What if readers feel antagonistic toward the heroine? Did you overlook
any loose ends?
Whilst
your own final read through can allay some of your concerns, there is nothing
like having a fresh pair of eyes to reassure, or help, you. And that’s where a
beta reader can be invaluable.
Beta
readers are generally non-professional readers who will read a manuscript
following initial completion and prior to publication. They may comment on
grammatical errors, anomalies in the plot, a way to improve the story, or any
combination of some or all of these issues. They are that fresh pair of eyes.
I
think a lot of authors use betas, and I find them invaluable. But they’re not
for everyone. When I approached an author friend to see if she used them, she
said, “Definitely not.” She didn’t want different opinions on her work and was
happy to work only with her editor. So it’s personal preference. That said,
whether you chose to use betas or not, I strongly advocate any writer to have
their work independently edited, even if you intend to self-publish. It will
add polish to your manuscript, and it’s amazing what a good editor will find,
no matter how well you think you have written your story.
But
back to betas. There are pros and cons to using them and there needs to be the inevitable
caveats. So here are my thoughts and recommendations.
1.
Ask a friend or family member.
We
all know the disadvantage of asking someone you know to provide feedback on
your book. The chances are they will not tell you that they hate it, or that
they think it’s badly written. But they will no doubt give encouragement and if
you are at the early stages of your writing adventure, that is no bad thing.
It’s great. Plus they are easier to find, in general.
2.
Ask someone from a reading group.
They
will have a love of books, and an experience
of an array of writing styles, plots and characterisations. They will also be
accustomed to hearing differing views. This could be your own opinion if you
don’t agree with everything they say. Remember this is your story—you own it.
But also remember the beta reader is being kind enough to read your manuscript.
It takes time and time is precious.
3.
Make sure it’s someone who likes the genre you write under.
I
see little point in asking someone who is an avid crime reader to read a
medieval romance. It may not be a pleasant experience for anyone.
4.
Ask someone from a writing group.
This
is particularly useful if you feel you need help with grammar or flow of the
story. These people should be able to spot errors and suggest ways to improve a
certain narrative if necessary. But a note of caution. These people can also be
too critical. Many may never have finished their own manuscript for that
reason. You are writing a story, not an essay.
5. Create a private group on your Facebook page.
As
you create an identity for yourself as an author, it is always good to have a Facebook
“business” page, in addition to your personal page. Readers will “like” you
page and hopefully join in any discussions generated. This will have its own
challenges but that discussion is for another day… Back to beta readers. Try
inviting people to join a private group to beta read your drafts. This is
something I am considering, the aim being to reach a mix of people including
some you don’t know, but knowing that they enjoy your genre. If you take this
option up, let me know how you get on and we can exchange notes J
6.
Consider members of other Facebook groups who do reviews.
I
have included this category as it is a possibility that some readers, who
normally read published books and submit reviews, may like to be a beta reader.
I personally only put up my published book for review in these groups, but I
guess it’s an option.
7.
Ask a book blogger
I
believe many would be happy to act as beta readers. These guys read books like
we breathe air and you should get some great feedback. It may not always be
what you want to hear, but if you choose to take their advice it could improve
your writing.
8.
Followers of a fanzine
These
are publications produced by enthusiasts. So for example, if your story has
some bearing to Star Trek, join their fanzine and connect with members who
could become your beta reader. Fifty
Shades started in a Twilight
fanzine.
9.
Consider any schemes run in organisations where you are a member.
I
am a member of the Romantic Novelists Association in the UK and they run a New Writers Scheme (NWS). There is a fee
for this and it goes much further than beta reading, with events and critique
of your manuscript by an assigned reader. However it is only for first time
writers. Once you’ve published a book it’s time to move on.
And
now I guess it’s time for me to move on and wrap up. Remember, a beta reader is
more than a reviewer. They should want to help you make your book even better.
Of course, at the end of the day it is your book. You should be keen to accept
any recommendations, or not be afraid to stick your own convictions if you
choose to. In any event always remember to thank the readers, maybe gift them a
copy of the final version of your book. After all, they have gifted you their
time to read, make notes, and feedback to you.
Good
luck with your writing and your route to final publication.
Keeping You: A Cheshire Love Story (Cheshire
Love Stories Book 3)
His
past haunts him. Revenge drives him. Can her love save him?
After
a chance meeting in a bookshop, young Suzy Harper is engaged by
multi-multimillionaire, Lawrence Bane, to work on translating a French
document. They embark on an intense relationship, but he is surrounded by
mystery and shame as demons from his past threaten to destroy everything he has
worked for, including her love for him.
This
exciting erotic romantic thriller traces the increasingly intense and tender
relationship between the inexperienced Suzy and her wealthy, troubled lover,
Lawrence. There are two obsessions in Lawrence’s life—his passion for Suzy and
his drive for revenge against the gangland boss who murdered his best friend.
Will
Suzy be strong enough to accept Lawrence for the man he is? Will Lawrence trust
the woman he loves enough to reveal his darkest secrets to her? Will their love
survive the challenges that lie ahead?
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I appreciate this advice. And the story sounds very good. Happy Writing!
ReplyDeleteAlso, thanks for the kind word on my blog. My mother felt guilty following me around with antiseptic spray when I suffered mononucleosis as a child. Heh... I told her I was not only understanding, but proud. And that beat my boyfriend's reaction, who thought me 'cute' and took photographs of my pale face. He was a doll overall, though, I must stay. ~grin~ Stay healthy, and thank you for the kind word.
Yeah! Moms are the best!
DeleteThanks Darla. I hope you're ok :) x
DeleteI have a great writing group. A couple of our members have told horror stories of other writing groups, so it may take time and effort to find a good bunch to help. As for book bloggers, those who have successful blogs may not have time to read as a beta. They're declining ARCs sometimes because they don't have time to finish the ones they have.
ReplyDeleteI know what you mean Liz. You can't paint everyone with the same brush. A blogger friend of mine likes to do beta readings for a change and challenge, but she too is turning published works away as she's too busy. I think it's important to find someone whose opinion you respect and with whom you can connect. And show appreciation, of course. Your writing group sounds lovely x
DeleteI have a long time tight-knit group of CPs (I'm unbelievably lucky that 2 are professional editors!), but I find general beta readers invaluable as well.
ReplyDeleteThanks for comment Tara, and glad you've find something that works for you. I have a professional editor who likes my work and helps me, too. Good luck with your writing x
DeleteGreat list! I love my beta's and don't know what I'd do without them :) Though my latest novel was picked up without any beta reads--something I'm a little wary of still!
ReplyDeleteHa, don't knock it Meradeth. Good luck, and thanks for comment xx
DeleteBlogging has allowed my path to cross with many terrific writers and avid readers. Some writers asked me to beta read their books, which I was happy to do, and some writers/readers have volunteered to beta read for me. It's a win-win situation all the way around, and our writing benefits tremendously.
ReplyDeleteYes, Susan, glad it's working for you. Good luck with your writing, and happy reading, beta or not xx
DeleteGreat list of advice.
ReplyDeleteI've yet to reach the beta reader stage but it's coming soon. The idea makes me nervous. Would anyone like it? Would anyone fall in love or despise my characters? It's enough that I'm undecided about it. But I'll definitely use a professional editor.
Go for it Lidy. Just think - it can only make you a better writer. And editor definitely right thing to do. Good luck x
DeleteI'd be lost without beta readers. It's like having a friend to tell you if you have spinach in your teeth before you head out on a big date.
ReplyDeleteHa - perish the thought. I have had a jumper on back to front though! Thanks for comment & good luck with your books x
DeleteBeta readers can be a huge help. I had one experience that was bad but pushed me to work harder. For Tsunami Crimes, I only had one beta reader. And for Flaming Crimes I decided not to use a single one. Oddly enough, the less I use now the better the outcome...because I’ve grown.
ReplyDeleteSounds like that's a good place to be for you, Chris. it has to be a personal choice, and as you say, that can change too. Thanks for comment & good luck. x
DeleteI have a couple of CPs, but no beta readers yet. At some point I'd like to do this though. Thanks for the tips :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jemi. I assumed a CP was harder to find. Good luck with beta readers x
DeleteI used beta readers for my current manuscript and their feedback was so insightful. They helped me identify a number of areas which needed to be addressed. I'm amazed at how generous all of them were with their time. Cheers - Ellen
ReplyDeleteSounds brilliant & good teamwork. Thanks, Ellen and good luck x
DeleteBeta readers have been so helpful to me. I think the advice about making sure the person or people who read your ms like the genre you wrote is SO important. Wishing Mollie all the best!
ReplyDelete~Jess
Thanks Jess Best wishes x
DeleteI never ask my family to read my stuff. I do have a great and very keen-eyed group that I send out my drafts to, and they are invaluable. Here's my best to Mollie. I enjoyed reading the post today.
ReplyDeleteThanks C. Sounds great that you have a group to send drafts to. Good luck with your writing xx
DeleteBeta readers are the best. A fresh set of eyes can see things that authors can't because we're so close to our own work.
ReplyDeleteCouldn't agree more Sherry xx
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